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Hey Samantha, love this piece because of the very strong imagery. Nice work with that, very interesting and enjoyable to read.

Hey Samantha, I love the memories and cozy feeling this reminds me of. Great detail and perfectly describes a night watching high school football.

Hey Karlee, I personally think this piece ties in well with that color swatch. I like how it ended with "But of course, You have school again tomorrow." I have read this probably 7-10 times and it's interesting to keep reading over and over for some reason, nice work.

Hey Taylor, "alone among the millions of strands of green wispy grass. The way it moved almost brought a sense of calm to the world", this line begins to make the imagery very strong for me, it brings a calm and content feeling for some reason. I love this piece, great work.

Hey Charles, great job rhyming and not getting away from the topic just trying to find words to work with it. I like the line "I probably need help from my mother", nice work.

Hey Matt, I love this different shade of blue. Nice job rhyming, I love the ending, "This bottle has a very calming hue, Because Pacific Pleasure is a shade of blue." Nice work