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Nice work, Will. I like how you had your first and last sentence highlighted. I think that style can make a lot of strong pieces.
Good job Will, I like how with just that part of a memorable passage you were able to elaborate that much about yourself.
Nice thoughts Will, I also like fiction for some of the same reasons you mentioned. I also read Crazy European Chick and thought it was a really good book.


Good work Katelynn, I also enjoyed this book a lot. I like the connection you made with your passage and the reason it is close to you.
 Nice job Katelynn, I agree that we can be trapped by mental and physical things like you mentioned. I like how your short story actually explains a lot.
Great work Katelynn! I enjoyed the short, touching story. I like how that all came from the idea of the camping ad.